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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:13:33 GMT -5
I'm sorry for your suffering. This is a great poem and I somewhat know your feelings.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:15:13 GMT -5
lol. True! I like this a lot!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:15:53 GMT -5
Very great work here; I love the feelings and the imagery produced by both!
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mariah
Jul 24, 2006 15:19:11 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:19:11 GMT -5
This is beautiful and has a great flow!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:16:43 GMT -5
"You cry a star, scars are nothing, smiles please my soul" Great line! Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:17:29 GMT -5
Hey! I really liked this one! Thanks for sharing!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:19:48 GMT -5
Ahhhh! This is so sweet!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:20:22 GMT -5
Great imagery!!! Wow!!!!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:22:26 GMT -5
Love it! Short and sweet and great imagery!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:23:11 GMT -5
Ouch. Powerful anger and great write!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:25:39 GMT -5
Swift and smooth. Lovely job!
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Hollow
Jul 24, 2006 15:24:01 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:24:01 GMT -5
Great imagery!!!! Great poem!!! Great write!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:26:27 GMT -5
WoW! This is one of the best DOP poems that i have read! Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:27:06 GMT -5
This is somewhat true but has a deep message. Thanks for sharing!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:21:47 GMT -5
This is powerful and very nice. Thanks for sharing!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:28:23 GMT -5
I liked this! Very powerful and dark emotion!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:27:39 GMT -5
Great last line and great imagery. Nice write!
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Wanting
Jul 24, 2006 15:20:58 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:20:58 GMT -5
lol! short and sweet!! love it!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:29:13 GMT -5
Powerful with lots of emotion. I can feel you!
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Undying
Jul 24, 2006 15:31:22 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:31:22 GMT -5
Simple yet very deep. A plea for help. Great job!
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