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secrets
Jul 24, 2006 15:29:56 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:29:56 GMT -5
I love the last line here. Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:34:16 GMT -5
Great poem with a nice story in it. Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:39:48 GMT -5
I love the feelings of joy that I get in this! Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:40:26 GMT -5
Lol I like the rhyming here. Nice job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:35:07 GMT -5
Good questions asked; I loved the power of it!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:41:06 GMT -5
Beautiful imagery. Very smooth!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 25, 2006 19:31:44 GMT -5
Oooh. Great language choice and imagery!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:42:02 GMT -5
And a good door it is. Fantastic poem really enjoyed it!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:45:05 GMT -5
I agree with all the above. That last line was amazing!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:45:54 GMT -5
Interesting.... Great write here!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:44:09 GMT -5
I love this Jessie! I love the flow and the imagery!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:46:18 GMT -5
Nice job here! I love the flow!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:37:36 GMT -5
Amazing imagery here. Very beautiful!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:38:09 GMT -5
I love the language here. Great job!
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Plea
Jul 24, 2006 15:36:17 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:36:17 GMT -5
Great wording here!!!! NIce job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:36:54 GMT -5
Hmmm... interesting imagery! Nice job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:38:54 GMT -5
"You can taste the dreams" I love that line. Great job!
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anguish
Jul 24, 2006 15:35:47 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:35:47 GMT -5
So sad. Great emotion thoughout.
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