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Jul 30, 2008 18:55:16 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 30, 2008 18:55:16 GMT -5
this sounds a lot like my first couple of license photos simple and intriguing piece.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 25, 2008 23:27:32 GMT -5
wow i loved the last three lines. beautiful image you created with this piece
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 25, 2008 23:26:17 GMT -5
i really liked this piece. there was something about it that was very moving. nice drops
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Jun 15, 2008 18:16:55 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 15, 2008 18:16:55 GMT -5
hey, welcome to TPS. this was a really good drops poem, it had excellent flow and great imagery. nice work
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 12, 2008 22:13:19 GMT -5
Pretty music for my love, You whisper my name We splash ocean waves Then twilight, quiet stars, A yellow diamond ring The truth you wish of I...
"Yes I will be queen with you my prince"
And wedding bells burst in the refrain Echoing above mountains We dance in the dark Under the stars
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:41:52 GMT -5
hey, welcome to TPS this was a very sweet little drop, much enjoyed. lovely imagery.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:40:22 GMT -5
"Lit incense curls like shimmering dragon" that was my favourite line, but only just, the rest was also really awe-inspiring and awesome. i really loved this piece of work *bookmarks*
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:38:21 GMT -5
this had a light feel to it that i really enjoyed. "candles flowing moody beauty, pouring incense blossoms." those two lines were my favourite
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:32:10 GMT -5
this was so good, i loved the imagery you created here. awesome work.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:23:52 GMT -5
i love the way you create such beautiful ku's with the dop. simple, effective and lovely!
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:05:23 GMT -5
this was a simple and beautiful piece, you painted a picture with few words that was vivid and very nice. much enjoyed.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 18:58:22 GMT -5
wow this had a real clarity and power in it. much enjoyed the read.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Apr 2, 2008 21:57:11 GMT -5
puts me in mind of edanna, a level in a game with lots of forest/greenery and flowers and things, i don't know why but it does lovely work violist.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 5, 2008 17:53:44 GMT -5
amazing how something so simple can have such depth. to me it really spoke of a child coming of age who now understands that santa is just a story...
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 5, 2008 17:50:24 GMT -5
wow, this worked really well. nice piece.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 31, 2007 19:33:05 GMT -5
i like this, you can have crosses between poetry and stories... this was really beautiful, i loved it. kudos.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 28, 2007 18:03:09 GMT -5
awesome little piece. much enjoyed it.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 28, 2007 18:00:57 GMT -5
i agree with lady B the imagery in this was really awesome. great dop.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 28, 2007 18:04:31 GMT -5
what an awesome piece. i'm amazed excuse me, i'll just pick my jaw off the floor now *picks up jaw and reattaches it* loved it a heap, thanks for sharing it
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 21, 2007 21:54:47 GMT -5
the ending was pretty cool. thanks for sharing
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