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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 14, 2007 22:40:26 GMT -5
what a lovely dop. i think it flowed quite well, especially as i know about the limitations. just another proof of what an amazing poet you are
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Night
Oct 4, 2007 19:53:24 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 4, 2007 19:53:24 GMT -5
this was really pretty. i loved it
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 4, 2007 19:52:22 GMT -5
this was cool, it brought a smile to my face. i know how interesting using dop is and you've done really well
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HEY!!
Oct 4, 2007 19:51:04 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 4, 2007 19:51:04 GMT -5
i liked it, great write...
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 1, 2007 21:14:28 GMT -5
wow. this was amazing. great work
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 1, 2007 21:15:12 GMT -5
this is wonderful, i loved the imagery, thanks for sharing.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 1, 2007 21:13:04 GMT -5
you did a lot with few words, great drop. thanks for sharing
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 8, 2007 1:22:11 GMT -5
this was awesome, great dop. thanks for sharing.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Sept 9, 2007 21:23:03 GMT -5
Summer days that swam Stars, delicate flower scents The beach, a blanket Girls, boys care-free Thinking, I listen, Rain on the window
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Sept 9, 2007 21:17:11 GMT -5
well done, this was impressive. i loved the way you came with such stunning images.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 29, 2007 22:10:09 GMT -5
i liked this, it was really good. The imagery was awesome
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Hallee
Jul 25, 2007 21:17:07 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 25, 2007 21:17:07 GMT -5
interesting poem you made. I liked the images you created
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 25, 2007 21:15:40 GMT -5
thanks, it's always a challenge
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 24, 2007 20:35:52 GMT -5
A.N. i must confess that I cheated, play(ed) wasn't on the board... however one word in a long poem for DOP isn't too bad...
Come child listen to an old violin The music remembers a Summer night With freedom from discontent as a band played Stars lingered on into day
God was generous to us Perfect weather, beautiful scent Of lilys, breath of flowers Love broke as an ocean around us
Tender smiles, Wedding wishes Sweet passion Too brief
Listen to an old violin The music meloncholy tonight Discontented clouds, rain drips down Gray world is snowy comfort now
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 3, 2007 19:01:34 GMT -5
i shall check them out thanks for commenting
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 29, 2007 19:39:12 GMT -5
Brown robin, white dove The sweet blue flowers blossom Images of Spring --------------------------------------------------------------- A.N. This is a haiku created using DOP, does that make it a dopku? hope you enjoy the poem
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 23, 2007 22:05:48 GMT -5
this is really beautiful. lovely imagery. welcome to TPS
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 20, 2007 22:20:18 GMT -5
*hugs* hard thing to go through. the simplicity of this makes it a wonderful emotional piece.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 24, 2007 20:14:27 GMT -5
Thankyou!
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 21, 2007 21:33:45 GMT -5
Thankyou elibabel
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