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Post by cynthiana on Dec 8, 2009 10:49:38 GMT -5
Nicely done. I also think you showed the true meaning of Thanksgiving and beyond. We do need to learn go passed our differences and try not to put each other down in the wrong way. Speak from our heart and to love our family. Learn to love everybody also; like Lord Jesus Christ showed loved each one of us.Love goes a long way, I'm not just speak to everybody, I'm also speak to myself. 'Cause I want to love like Christ loved us.
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Post by cynthiana on Apr 30, 2009 1:34:48 GMT -5
Well done on drop poem. You where right to the point; bravo.
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Post by cynthiana on Oct 15, 2008 2:39:59 GMT -5
Thanks a bunch; I had hard time using the words that was there. I'm happy I did good job.
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Post by cynthiana on Oct 13, 2008 10:53:23 GMT -5
Sherry intestine shimmer when a snake muffle in grass. My daughter stretch limb brown burgandy orange outcry sweep fall autumn mountain road. Twist sunflower dress baby wilt death. Nevertheless she prophet highlight clouds.
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Dec 27, 2007 21:14:17 GMT -5
Post by cynthiana on Dec 27, 2007 21:14:17 GMT -5
Very well written poem. It has wonderful details of the child.
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Post by cynthiana on Dec 27, 2007 21:16:19 GMT -5
Well written; so true.
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Post by cynthiana on Dec 27, 2007 21:19:26 GMT -5
Very well written. You describe the sunset very well. I enjoy watching the sun going up.
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