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Post by €ereza|£inze on Jul 11, 2008 20:55:04 GMT -5
You called this odd, but I think you did a really good job either way. I think it's so hard to make a poem with drops, so I am impressed when I see stuff like this.
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Post by €ereza|£inze on Jul 5, 2008 1:04:58 GMT -5
I love this line... Waves burst like splashing diamonds.
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Post by €ereza|£inze on Jul 5, 2008 0:55:04 GMT -5
Interesting. I like the simplicity~ the intentional list format. And it has a strong message... which is always good. xD
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Post by €ereza|£inze on Jun 30, 2008 3:52:55 GMT -5
Diamond Rain
Pretty star in midnight mud I walk under the diamond rain Sneakers pretend to splash ocean My quiet music will echo Whisper, magic love And peace
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Post by €ereza|£inze on Jun 29, 2008 3:44:45 GMT -5
I don't know about everyone else, but I detected a subtle second meaning behind this poem... Maybe I'm just bad. Either way, imagery is key. And your talent shines through. Continuing to read your poems...
Exalting you.
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