phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
Posts: 230
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Post by phoenixalexis on Apr 6, 2010 10:37:15 GMT -5
Foreseeing a memory, Hypothetical transformation, Constant, digital signals.
Vessels pump faithfully under uniform, Muscle heresy doubles, Specialist speaks, swears Examiner; the procedure is frequent.
When the screen rolls down, The void renewing horror, Emerging, The capitalist, rages, Of triggers, aliens and explosions,
He can't listen, Addressing the stiff, revised envelopes, That were his company's, To steer to confidential coordinates.
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phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
Posts: 230
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Post by phoenixalexis on Aug 4, 2009 3:31:31 GMT -5
Wow, this was really descriptive, I love the idea of 'pockets of the spiritual world' Beautiful Imagary! Exalt!x
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phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
Posts: 230
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Post by phoenixalexis on Jun 24, 2009 4:55:28 GMT -5
Do you know where the piece is Nevermore? I would really like to read it? I think drops is a really great idea. I have been trying for a while to shift away from rhyme and find it really hard to do, so the control of drops really helped.
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phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
Posts: 230
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Post by phoenixalexis on Jun 23, 2009 10:18:03 GMT -5
Rock Musician, Another spiritual substitute, Indulges she in ideology, Blackmail beneath chords, Concealed stereo desire, He calls on vintage physics, with focused strategy, And her, vulnerable, sails with dread and regret, as he volunteers heroin, promising heaven.
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