twihardangel
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Frost
Nov 16, 2009 18:35:13 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 16, 2009 18:35:13 GMT -5
Thanks to my amazingg friend Memory over here, I've been starting to write poetry. I never really have been able to, and now I guess I've found another thing that I like. Dont worry, I'll probably have something' new out by next week. Ive already got something in my mind for a new poem lol.
Anyways, thanks.
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twihardangel
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Frost
Nov 14, 2009 9:15:31 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 14, 2009 9:15:31 GMT -5
Thank you.
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twihardangel
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Post by twihardangel on Nov 13, 2009 15:28:47 GMT -5
Still awesome.
Like i said, looks like the way I write with the repeating lines. Thats really the only way I can write poetry. lol
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twihardangel
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Indulge
Nov 13, 2009 10:14:08 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 13, 2009 10:14:08 GMT -5
I agree with Mazbaby. Short yet deep. Have to say that the First stanza is my favorite. I wrote a short poem using D.O.P as well, it was a little longer than this and i couldnt do it in as few words as you. Great write.
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twihardangel
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Frost
Nov 12, 2009 17:11:35 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 12, 2009 17:11:35 GMT -5
I was roaming the site and found Drops of Poetry. Im not really good at poetry, its not really my forte, but i thought id give it a try. This is my first time usuing Drops of Poetry (and really writing poetry), I hope i followed all the rules. Please let me know wha you think.
This, my friend, is what troubles you: Frost
He combats brutal ice. Snow. Terror. Hate. A crystal falls.
Struggles to sleep, He fears the void, darkness succeeds. Lonely without power, without hope, without her. A crystal falls.
Icy bolts forced throughout his backbone, Is it natural? A crystal falls.
Is it supernatural? The crystals fall.
Then Calm. Comfortable. Thankful. Only she, the diamond, comforts.
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