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Post by - Moirae - on Jan 1, 2012 22:46:04 GMT -5
RR, you have such a lovely touch with these drops poems. This is amazing! I did not expect this from the title at all, but am I glad I got a chance to read it.
"She is rarely willing to archive The shame milked."
Wow!
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 31, 2011 17:34:07 GMT -5
I agree with B, you are the Queen of the Drops dear. You artfully craft these words into a beautiful poem that does not read as a drops piece at all. I loved the last line. Well done.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 26, 2011 9:29:35 GMT -5
I adore this piece. Beautifully arranged. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 26, 2011 9:06:20 GMT -5
This doesn't read like you had difficulty with this. What a dark drops to produce with these choice of words. Great work.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 6, 2011 17:41:35 GMT -5
What a great story you were able to write with drops! I doesn't read like you were limited to your words at all. Very nicely done. I agree with the others, the second stanza is great.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 6, 2011 17:38:18 GMT -5
Thank you all for your lovely and kind words. I really enjoyed the whimsical nature of the words that were available. Thank you again!
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Post by - Moirae - on Oct 23, 2011 15:04:53 GMT -5
Daniel, I loved this drops by you. That opening stanza floored me. Lovely work.
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Post by - Moirae - on Sept 23, 2011 19:33:40 GMT -5
CHA, I have missed reading your work and I agree with Jah about the sense of adventure in this poem. Great drops!
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Post by - Moirae - on Sept 22, 2011 9:44:57 GMT -5
This piece took me on quite the journey and I was impressed that this was a drops poem, if I didn't know, I'd think it were just a regular poem. Wonderful work AoR; it's great to read your work again.
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Post by - Moirae - on Sept 10, 2011 17:07:30 GMT -5
Very thought-provoking drops. I agree with Flames about your use of punctuation it just made the poem shine. Very nicely penned. Great work Lilith.
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Post by - Moirae - on Aug 21, 2011 18:07:25 GMT -5
I love the description of the sense of relief the character feels plunging into the sea and the anxiety of returning to the reality of the surface. Very well communicated. I enjoyed reading.
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Post by - Moirae - on Aug 21, 2011 18:03:22 GMT -5
Lovely, soothing words you've woven together here. The imagery wisked me away. This was a sensory vacation. Thank you for that. I needed it.
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Post by - Moirae - on Aug 11, 2011 20:14:45 GMT -5
Very interestingly crafted work here, I like how the imagery transported me seaside with the ocean mist against my face. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing this Drop.
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Post by - Moirae - on Jun 8, 2011 8:29:21 GMT -5
RR, just the beauty of the first two lines had me hooked. This is my favorite drops by you thus far. Great imaginative work.
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Post by - Moirae - on Jun 8, 2011 8:26:43 GMT -5
Very well thought out poem! The second stanza was perfect. I very much enjoyed reading this piece. Great work!
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Post by - Moirae - on Jun 8, 2011 8:21:04 GMT -5
I thought that this piece was very interesting especially with the addition of the title and the first line. It help to give the poem substance and make the reader delve into the mind of a writer and then the last line almost revealing the beginnings of writer's block.
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Post by - Moirae - on Jun 8, 2011 8:18:41 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS! If you have any questions feel free to PM me.
This is such a beautifully written piece that it hardly feels like a drops poem at all. Very well composed and raw with emotion. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more by you.
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Post by - Moirae - on May 14, 2011 13:13:18 GMT -5
This is quite insightful to read, it gave me a peaceful feeling while I took in ever word. Lovely drops, your creativity shows. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by - Moirae - on May 12, 2011 16:58:10 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS! If you have any questions feel free to PM me.
Your opening line is captivating and makes me wish I had thought of that combination sooner. Great little story you wove into this poem; this is quite an 'entrance' for the speaker and yourself. I look forward to what else you have to offer. Thank you for sharing this drops and I hope to see you around the boards.
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Post by - Moirae - on May 11, 2011 18:36:39 GMT -5
This was such a fun and playful drops! I really enjoyed the story you wove into these words. Very cleverly done Lily.
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