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Post by - Moirae - on May 8, 2011 7:01:42 GMT -5
This was so perfectly described that it doesn't seem like a drops poem at all! *claps* This is quite the masterpiece! Your words are woven together so flawlessly and with such ease that I could hear every raindrop, every crack of thunder. Wonderfully done!
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 28, 2011 15:52:13 GMT -5
This is a fine example of a drop! This piece is so deep and emotional. Lovely work.
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 18, 2011 7:54:09 GMT -5
Anchor the Clouds
Under guidance, strawberry flowers color clouds Youthful birds chirp, sprout and sail. Grass ribbons hum silent noise Baby fruit mirrors a green playground Abstract spaces complement fragrant entrances. Summer's museum staggers wide-- A dramatic endeavor builds.
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 18, 2011 7:20:53 GMT -5
"Spaces, next steals flower fragrance. Another fool leaks bright color under anchor."
I thought that these lines were incredibly thought provoking and graceful. They were my favorite of the poem. I think the fact that the intention isn't spelled out directly for the reader makes this poem more intriguing, it requires the reader to take in every word and craft the meaning in their own head. Very nicely done.
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 18, 2011 7:15:55 GMT -5
Wow, the power you put into this short piece is astounding. I agree with Lady B, the poem told the story itself. Amazing work!
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 9, 2011 16:29:25 GMT -5
Jahaliel, what a striking poem you have composed with only a few words. The text effects are made this piece pop. Very nicely done.
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 9, 2011 16:27:28 GMT -5
Beautifully composed drop. I've enjoyed how you put everything together. Great work.
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Jan 3, 2008 15:39:23 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jan 3, 2008 15:39:23 GMT -5
Very interesting DOP narrative. Well developed story; thought out. I enjoyed reading.
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Post by - Moirae - on Jan 3, 2008 15:32:39 GMT -5
Please teach me how you write like this? Is there no genre you can't master? Even with DOP you transform the words into a powerful and beautiful image. Very well done.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 24, 2007 15:53:08 GMT -5
This was quite a charming DOP poem; well use of the words given. Good work, thanks for sharing.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 15, 2007 18:20:15 GMT -5
A tad bit confusing but definitely an interesting story for the reader to follow.
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Frost
Dec 15, 2007 18:21:53 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Dec 15, 2007 18:21:53 GMT -5
I am in full agreement with Lady B and Olivia, the imagery is quite stunning, well put together.
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:30:48 GMT -5
I agree with the above poster's comment, the first three lines seemed well done but the last two don't seem quite right to me...maybe I missed the point of your poem
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:20:56 GMT -5
what interesting and intricate story you told here...great use of the Drops of Poetry feature
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:22:56 GMT -5
love the way you chose to end the piece...it leaves something for the reader to imagine...good work
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:25:10 GMT -5
I have to agree with Heere; something quite sinter lurking just under the surface of this poem did put a shiver up my spine too...but I still loved it!
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:29:07 GMT -5
this poem put me in a peaceful state of mind that I rarely get to visit, so thank you for putting me there with this little gem
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:27:47 GMT -5
I enjoyed this piece a lot...there was a lot of attention to details..if I were to read this poem in any other board I wound not be able to tell that this was a Drops of Poetry poem...great work here!
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Mr. 25
Oct 13, 2007 11:39:32 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Oct 13, 2007 11:39:32 GMT -5
quick witty and well written..what more could a reader want? loved the narrative story-like quality to this..
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Post by - Moirae - on Sept 20, 2007 13:13:29 GMT -5
very lovely...i enjoy reading jd44...thanks for sharing with us!
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