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Secrets
Jul 9, 2006 12:24:45 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:24:45 GMT -5
i agree with LuCinda...beautiful write
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:29:41 GMT -5
gorgeous imagery
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Death
Jul 9, 2006 12:30:54 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:30:54 GMT -5
i agree with waterlily...
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:40:09 GMT -5
hmmm..interesting
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:13:44 GMT -5
wonderfully done!
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:42:50 GMT -5
wonderful work...made me feel courageous reading it..
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:17:05 GMT -5
what a lovely poem! the ending really made it
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poem 3
Jul 9, 2006 12:44:07 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:44:07 GMT -5
short but interesting
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poem 2
Jul 9, 2006 12:46:08 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:46:08 GMT -5
interesting work here...leaves a lot to the readers imagination
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:45:20 GMT -5
you expressed the emotion very well throughout this work
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:48:06 GMT -5
i simply loved this work...excellently done
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:52:22 GMT -5
very good write..you brought a lot of ideas into this that a lot of writers shy away from..
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:53:33 GMT -5
the title was a stricking contrast to your poem...not bad..sort of a delightful contrast..
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:56:50 GMT -5
wonderful work here...i really enjoyed this..
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:49:40 GMT -5
the ending line brought the whole poem together..good work
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:59:26 GMT -5
the heart of you poem shows..but dont force it...like Elf said...just let it flow
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:58:21 GMT -5
ver well written...i think we can all relate to this one
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 11, 2006 20:06:24 GMT -5
not bad at all
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 11, 2006 19:12:15 GMT -5
it seems all chopped up and yet flowed at the same time...interesting....well i like it too!
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 13:09:45 GMT -5
i like the fact that its just free versed...gave it a unique look
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