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Post by knotapoet on Mar 2, 2011 21:45:17 GMT -5
That really good.Nice job
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Post by knotapoet on Mar 2, 2011 21:40:16 GMT -5
Nicely done
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 26, 2011 22:36:54 GMT -5
Nice job.I couldn't come close to using all the words.
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Balance
Feb 26, 2011 22:32:10 GMT -5
Post by knotapoet on Feb 26, 2011 22:32:10 GMT -5
Thank you all for the comments
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 25, 2011 21:53:36 GMT -5
Nicely done.I have read the 2nd stanza about 5 times.Beautiful
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 25, 2011 20:06:34 GMT -5
Great poem,I really enjoyed it
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 25, 2011 7:54:25 GMT -5
Well done.I think I have been to this Hotel, it's outside of Dayton.
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 24, 2011 23:16:46 GMT -5
Well done.Nice first drop.I love the line The world rots in tiring noise,this is so true
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Feb 24, 2011 23:08:40 GMT -5
Post by knotapoet on Feb 24, 2011 23:08:40 GMT -5
clouds approaching overhead orbiting conspicuously shadows lengthy spectrum oppresses disregarding the officers warnings a cynic rearranges evidence reasons invalid to circumstances wind crashes seconds to react noise drilling incompetence overflows into disorder distress suggests injury tiring cries throughout behind the tower underneath its shadow twins burst into the world a magical birth welcoming the sisters a father silently sighs
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Post by knotapoet on Dec 16, 2010 15:36:19 GMT -5
Very well done.I really enjoyed it.
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Post by knotapoet on Dec 13, 2010 9:17:31 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments and the welcome.That was fun and can't wait for a new list of words.I am new to poetry and writing.This is a place that looks like I can learn a few things.
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Post by knotapoet on Dec 11, 2010 21:55:09 GMT -5
an October wedding planned in the mountains throughout the woods a crisp autumn breeze flowers in the chapel a ritual ceremony why the endless theater behind the myth questioning love the fear inside won't leave she loves me my counterpart, a puzzled face tears develop she kisses me getting married to succeed triumph over boundaries
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