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Promise
May 17, 2005 0:29:46 GMT -5
Post by (Amaranthine) on May 17, 2005 0:29:46 GMT -5
Is this supose to be a poem or a sentence ... Interesting thought, though-- brings to mind a ghost or something...
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Apr 19, 2005 22:17:51 GMT -5
Nice write, I agree with Rose.
This does have errors, one of the funnier ones was this-
I believe you meant "Gentle". Genital refers to the g-------...as in male and female parts, to be PG with it. You might want to fix that.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Apr 19, 2005 22:12:21 GMT -5
Nice. I noticed a few errors-- I think it sould be Dreams And it's "angel 's -- it's possessive, the angel's heart I liked it though
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cuttin
Apr 19, 2005 22:06:22 GMT -5
Post by (Amaranthine) on Apr 19, 2005 22:06:22 GMT -5
It's an okay poem. You described cutting well...
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Wanting
Apr 19, 2005 22:03:14 GMT -5
Post by (Amaranthine) on Apr 19, 2005 22:03:14 GMT -5
That's it? Quite short for a "poem", but I like the thought.
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ghosts
Mar 6, 2005 4:39:44 GMT -5
Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:39:44 GMT -5
great use of the given words
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:42:02 GMT -5
I like the first stanza the best, nice write
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:51:43 GMT -5
Cool poem, I liked it. I was a bit confused though- the title is "insomnia" and in the first line you say "I slept"- that kind of contradicts itself...oh well, it's still a nice poem
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:44:53 GMT -5
Writer's block: evil Your poem: good
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:49:03 GMT -5
It's simple, I like the phrase.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:30:29 GMT -5
Great use of the words, I love the darkness there
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:36:07 GMT -5
Short and sweet, I like it
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Feb 10, 2005 18:32:29 GMT -5
Nice write, I like the imagery
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:33:07 GMT -5
I love it. I never added words to the given ones, but yours really works. I like your format too.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 7, 2005 0:45:43 GMT -5
No prob, you cracked me up though: "imbarissing" for embarrassing...
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 5, 2005 0:16:52 GMT -5
Cool poem, I like it Oh, you spelled Thief wrong in the title...
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 3, 2005 0:07:35 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS, I hope you like it here Nice poem- I like the first line- it was interesting how you put it, the rest in good too.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 1, 2005 21:11:52 GMT -5
"I search" {©Amaranthine}
I search For angels In the stars Silently I cry My anguish Echoed To the moon I write With ashes and tears A plea As Poetry A moment Possessed By cold And Fear My heart hollow A cauldron Of wasted dreams I search For angels I search... ...I search... ...For sunlight
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 1, 2005 20:27:29 GMT -5
Really cool, I like it
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 28, 2004 17:42:36 GMT -5
Nice poem. I like it....but are all the words in the Drops of Poetry thing? I don't remember seeing some of them...
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