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Post by AlienFaery on Sept 18, 2004 18:36:56 GMT -5
Definitely enjoyed it. Isn't it cool how the Drops of Poetry can be used so differently by different people? Look forward to more from you. - M
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Post by AlienFaery on Sept 26, 2004 1:54:52 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments I think it might be fun to give this "Drops of Poetry" thing another go. - M
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Post by AlienFaery on Sept 15, 2004 2:06:07 GMT -5
This is my first attempt at this. - M I found the door To your naked secret In a hollow moment That tasted of death, When I saw beneath the Haunted anguish in your eyes.
The ghosts that were buried In your heart Danced free And you were like a Wasted star, A truth that never was...
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Post by AlienFaery on Oct 8, 2004 21:48:52 GMT -5
Lovely haiku. - M
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Post by AlienFaery on Sept 15, 2004 1:20:49 GMT -5
I really liked the idea of a "delicious secret". Cool poem. The last line resonated with me. - M
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