anonamanda
Wandering Muse
I've been lost so long
Posts: 66
|
Post by anonamanda on Jan 8, 2012 15:45:14 GMT -5
Well written. It was meaningful, while short and simplistic. Enjoyed very much.
Anon
|
|
anonamanda
Wandering Muse
I've been lost so long
Posts: 66
|
Post by anonamanda on Jan 8, 2012 15:42:59 GMT -5
Dark... deep... It sent a chill up my spine. Enjoyed.
Anon
|
|
anonamanda
Wandering Muse
I've been lost so long
Posts: 66
|
Quiet
Jan 8, 2012 15:41:41 GMT -5
Post by anonamanda on Jan 8, 2012 15:41:41 GMT -5
Gracefully penned and beautiful. The last line really struck me. Great!
Anon
|
|
anonamanda
Wandering Muse
I've been lost so long
Posts: 66
|
Post by anonamanda on Jan 8, 2012 15:39:37 GMT -5
Songbird Blinding streetlight twinkles, willing to quit. Why refuse to rip gravity, reducing goodbye to shame. Anywhere overhead, exceeding hell when the songbird opens prime goodness. Hourrendously inconsistent, rarely useful. Please worry, it is necessary
|
|