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Lions
Oct 28, 2011 12:19:41 GMT -5
Post by BhindBluEyes♥ on Oct 28, 2011 12:19:41 GMT -5
Bared teeth, Formed under bright eyes. Enormous lions barking in quick splashes-- Tousled tail hair, shining coats. Smelling each other, Silent confusion when one dashes past. Open sea water-- Lions thrown inside. Children eying lions swimming In black water. Pushing to float to the surface-- To fresh air. Water evaporated, Lifted to the surface. World's tough problems shrugged off, Wildly loosened.
~ Tabitha Anne LaSalle©♥
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Post by BhindBluEyes♥ on Sept 3, 2011 18:03:05 GMT -5
Interesting. I especially love the last line (: I've never attempted a D.O.P myself, but you make it look easy, although I'm quite sure it's not. Nice write, thank you for sharing
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Post by BhindBluEyes♥ on Jul 28, 2011 12:23:20 GMT -5
Wow. I really love this. And only using those words.. It's spectacular.
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