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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 6, 2004 14:01:54 GMT -5
Thanks
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 5, 2004 17:19:40 GMT -5
Awww...thanks Thousandfaces
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 4, 2004 16:36:21 GMT -5
Earth smiles with sunlight Naked blossoms embrace a new season Spring danced apart the snow Recoiled free of a frigid death Cuddles the sun in secret desire
A rose, soft tears grow Inhales to breathe in sunlight Dreams of a passion Follows the sun Pleads an embrace a secret desire
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 4, 2004 16:40:17 GMT -5
Cool....this was good.
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 4, 2004 16:39:05 GMT -5
OOOOOOh! Very chilling. I like this
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 4, 2004 16:38:05 GMT -5
Wow...this is good. I tried this out and it was quite challenging to come up with a poem with a set of words.
You did a good job
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 4, 2004 16:41:57 GMT -5
This gave me a chuckle. You had good rhythmn through the whole poem Good write.
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