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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Mar 24, 2005 21:59:31 GMT -5
kind of funny even, and a bit dark. Nice work hehe
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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Mar 20, 2005 21:56:07 GMT -5
My world of poverty is gray And your eyes are hollow blue I exist in fridgid snow Ashes, the sunlight that is you
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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Mar 23, 2005 20:22:24 GMT -5
I agree, the sound and silence gives a unique feel. Good work.
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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Mar 20, 2005 21:58:12 GMT -5
Very haunting. Gave a image of being trapped inside the grave. Scary thought. Nice work
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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Aug 31, 2005 18:41:27 GMT -5
Sad, made me think about someone with H.I.V.
What a sad poem. I am probably off the mark by a long shot but poetry is that way from time to time, isn't it? Glad to see your still around. This is the first I have seen of your recent poetry.
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