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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 18, 2011 7:54:09 GMT -5
Anchor the Clouds
Under guidance, strawberry flowers color clouds Youthful birds chirp, sprout and sail. Grass ribbons hum silent noise Baby fruit mirrors a green playground Abstract spaces complement fragrant entrances. Summer's museum staggers wide-- A dramatic endeavor builds.
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Post by Riverrose ~April!!!~ on Apr 18, 2011 15:58:54 GMT -5
You are so good at putting those words together to make poem- I really enjoyed this. I especially like the image of "Summer's museum."It describes to me how some people look at nature like they do exhibits at a museum. Nature is one of the best things to study. -Riverrose
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Post by ::SAGA:: on Apr 22, 2011 9:36:18 GMT -5
ღ Moirae -Once again you are brilliant, you never dissapoint. I have to say you are one of my favs on here. >Abstract spaces complement fragrant entrances< Amazing! I mean, when I read you, I feel incompetent and envious that I didn't think to put those words together..Awesome. Exalt...as usual
One,Saga
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Post by Northerly on Apr 25, 2011 5:54:06 GMT -5
Hhhmmm...so much promise for the day.
Uplifting!
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Post by bcoyotey on Apr 25, 2011 20:26:02 GMT -5
Moi Moi, The beauty of the images you create float on the soft summer clouds of dusk. Such a lovely poem that doesn't feel like a Drops at all. Exalt. Lady B
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Post by Root Beer on Apr 29, 2011 21:48:48 GMT -5
This is so brilliant, I love the way you wrote this, the imagery is just so wonder.
Respects Rootz
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on May 8, 2011 10:34:59 GMT -5
Beautiful. You've teased those words into creating something sublime. I love it.
Lily^^
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Nov 7, 2011 16:03:50 GMT -5
Dear Moirae, I agree with LadyB. This does not appear to be written from a limited number or set of words. Beautiful and full of wonder.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 6, 2011 17:38:18 GMT -5
Thank you all for your lovely and kind words. I really enjoyed the whimsical nature of the words that were available. Thank you again!
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Post by dragonfilth on Dec 11, 2011 20:43:50 GMT -5
very beautiful and enchanting I really love this you have a great way with piecing words
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Post by windowflower on Jan 12, 2012 22:41:33 GMT -5
Summer's museum staggers wide-- A dramatic endeavor builds.This is a beautiful image
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