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Lions
Oct 28, 2011 12:19:41 GMT -5
Post by BhindBluEyes♥ on Oct 28, 2011 12:19:41 GMT -5
Bared teeth, Formed under bright eyes. Enormous lions barking in quick splashes-- Tousled tail hair, shining coats. Smelling each other, Silent confusion when one dashes past. Open sea water-- Lions thrown inside. Children eying lions swimming In black water. Pushing to float to the surface-- To fresh air. Water evaporated, Lifted to the surface. World's tough problems shrugged off, Wildly loosened.
~ Tabitha Anne LaSalle©♥
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Lions
Oct 28, 2011 18:10:42 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 28, 2011 18:10:42 GMT -5
Hey Tabby great to see you in the drops. I really love this, it's a great piece that ending was awesome. Lovely write.
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Lions
Nov 2, 2011 7:03:57 GMT -5
Post by shiz♥k3sa on Nov 2, 2011 7:03:57 GMT -5
wow, this is so awesome. enjoyed.
~shiz
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Lions
Nov 10, 2011 7:34:50 GMT -5
Post by ~k~(tornadoes) on Nov 10, 2011 7:34:50 GMT -5
What a great write! I really enjoyed reading this
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Lions
Nov 12, 2011 13:04:05 GMT -5
Post by thehippyboy on Nov 12, 2011 13:04:05 GMT -5
great drop!
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Lions
Nov 20, 2011 16:58:08 GMT -5
Post by ltlpencil on Nov 20, 2011 16:58:08 GMT -5
delighted! interlace is very secure. nice!
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Dec 30, 2011 12:49:30 GMT -5
Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Dec 30, 2011 12:49:30 GMT -5
I just LOVE what you did here Tabby.. Such a tagible and smoth read. I love how different the drops can be interpreted by different people. I really liked the set that you created this from.
'Enormous lions barking in quick splashes'- That line is absolutely marvellous! What a way to describe it!
Cleverly done. I love the menace and the dark mystery that surrounds the 'lions' here. A parallel was drawn for me in this. That the lions were more those insevure thoughts and troubles that constantly stalk me.. Dangerous and predatory.
Brilliant Drops!! Truly impressive!
Lily^^
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