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Nov 20, 2011 13:33:12 GMT -5
Post by ltlpencil on Nov 20, 2011 13:33:12 GMT -5
he lifted head splashed sea pushed problems past evaporated in fresh open air
she shrugged silent walked water shining swimming steps back to the black surface
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Nov 22, 2011 4:31:25 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Nov 22, 2011 4:31:25 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS. This is a clever and well constructed drops. Loved the sneaky alliteration in there. Excellent work.
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Nov 23, 2011 4:11:41 GMT -5
Post by shiz♥k3sa on Nov 23, 2011 4:11:41 GMT -5
awesome. loved this drops.
~shiz
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Nov 27, 2011 17:56:40 GMT -5
Post by Chelle on Nov 27, 2011 17:56:40 GMT -5
an interesting construction... would never have seen that one myself. Welcome and I hope to see more from you!
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