etchers
Established Muse
[AWD:26]
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Post by etchers on Dec 6, 2011 16:31:16 GMT -5
This was so difficult. Boy Cannonballed in Open Water, The Sea His head under He won’t return Lifted to the surface Shining, Pale
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Dec 12, 2011 5:40:48 GMT -5
A very dark and disturbing drops, cleverly thought out for sure.
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 26, 2011 9:06:20 GMT -5
This doesn't read like you had difficulty with this. What a dark drops to produce with these choice of words. Great work.
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Dec 30, 2011 12:45:25 GMT -5
I struggle making the Drops make sense! So don't cha worry none.. But gee, this is fantastic! I love what a dark and descriptive little tale you twist, the emphasis is big on those short and snappy lines. I really like this. Well done!!
Lily^^
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anonamanda
Wandering Muse
I've been lost so long
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Post by anonamanda on Jan 8, 2012 15:42:59 GMT -5
Dark... deep... It sent a chill up my spine. Enjoyed.
Anon
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