anonamanda
Wandering Muse
I've been lost so long
Posts: 66
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Post by anonamanda on Jan 8, 2012 15:39:37 GMT -5
Songbird Blinding streetlight twinkles, willing to quit. Why refuse to rip gravity, reducing goodbye to shame. Anywhere overhead, exceeding hell when the songbird opens prime goodness. Hourrendously inconsistent, rarely useful. Please worry, it is necessary
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Post by everhopeful on Jan 13, 2012 12:33:40 GMT -5
A very earnest plea, this is a poem which manages to make the most of the difficult drops constraint and still form some solid images and create a sense of atmosphere and tension. Well penned, Mick
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Post by 3M2R [DongSaeng] on Jan 15, 2012 0:22:27 GMT -5
very nice ending. Good write. Not easy, I tried to write one with the mess of words from drops of poetry. I truly admire your ability to form this poem. Beautiful.
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 5:16:42 GMT -5
When reading this I could not help but think it is a Metaphor for some kind of disastrous mistake of a personal nature or of human kind...I may be way off the mark, but this was a very well written piece with great imagery and creativity of thought....truly enjoyed....Musie
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