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Post by theDSW on Mar 24, 2012 11:17:56 GMT -5
Archive closely goodness Appreciate a tender songbird Refresh the busy calcified attacks in libration Willing to quit worrying Rip blind critical misstatements Save joviality, dance longer Goodbye to doleful times Twinkle an illumining biochemistry
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 25, 2012 3:25:33 GMT -5
OH this is amazing, you worked in biochemistry, I wanted to but couldn't work out how. an excellent drops, flowing and interesting.
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Ona Sabela
Established Muse
Sitting under this tree, I'm sure to always have lightbulbs over my head.
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Post by Ona Sabela on Apr 2, 2012 18:18:31 GMT -5
"Goodbye to doleful times" ~ love this line! <3
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Apr 3, 2012 14:59:46 GMT -5
I love the almost disjointed and askew feel this has. The way the phasing is slightly jarring, but in a good way! You've made an effective and evoking piece of writing without all that unecessary fluff and gumpf. It's always a pleasure to read you my friend, keep 'em coming, you've always got a fan in me!!
Lily^^
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