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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Apr 3, 2012 15:24:37 GMT -5
*A/N - This was created with a passionate subject in mind. I'm an active advocate for the rights and safeguarding of vulnerable adults. The word choices are not necessarily a reflection of my own beliefs.
Clinical Consent
Every fascinated invalid spits, explores the low, She will obscure the idiom, Acting clinical, she thirsts.
She tries to respond, Guilt grinds, bumps chests, She is furniture, a package, A skirt, a project.
Emerging censored, obliged, A blanket advocate clash, Scripted consent, why complain? She is a fruit, a paradox.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Apr 4, 2012 6:21:32 GMT -5
This is a very deep drops, The second stanza in particular really spoke to me, brilliant work.
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Post by djk ~ 8000 on Apr 4, 2012 6:25:43 GMT -5
Lily - very heavy, hard-hitting stuff. This bothered me, don't ask me why.. which means you have done a remarkable job transmitting your words through. I am afraid I am going to have to exalt this. Sorry
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