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Post by ImperfectEmo on Apr 4, 2005 18:47:51 GMT -5
All my blades have deadly names What ever they touched they burn with flames But this one was different from all the rest It burned a hole throughout my chest
It hurt so bad and bled so much It burned a hole with just one touch As I slowly slip away My mind started to astray How can he do this to me All that’s left is my hearts debris
The blade's name is too hard so say But I see him like everyday I call him a blade not for metal and rust But for his deadly lustful trust
My mind seems so far out of whack Please god can I have silly heart back This stupid heart needs to mend Instead of bleeding over and over again
I wipe the blade of my blood Said good bye to that sexy stud All was wrong in the start Because he was a blade right next to my heart
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Apr 11, 2005 1:19:39 GMT -5
Very interesting piece, especially to have been dragged out of Drops. Great work.
-- Jus
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Post by LaChicaMorada on Apr 17, 2005 18:02:29 GMT -5
I really like the idea of comparing a person to a blade. Good work!
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Post by firefly501 on Apr 28, 2005 19:25:35 GMT -5
I really liked this one especially the next to last stanza(my mind seems....). In the second part where you say my mind started ... I think you want- to stray -not to astray. Once again though I really enjoyed this read.
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