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Feb 18, 2006 23:08:11 GMT -5
Post by mercywraith on Feb 18, 2006 23:08:11 GMT -5
Pure deliscios anguish Tears linger silently beneath My naked battle Dreams echo of a moment when I fully saw Your quiet eyes spill Burried poetry. I fell In Passion with you; Nothing is evident... I breathe each haunted secret And taste ashes and sunlight.
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Mar 12, 2006 1:23:16 GMT -5
Post by ~LuCinda~In My Heart Forever on Mar 12, 2006 1:23:16 GMT -5
mercywraith, I agree. Beautiful write.Very moving. ~Lucinda~
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Jul 9, 2006 12:24:45 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:24:45 GMT -5
i agree with LuCinda...beautiful write
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Jan 30, 2012 4:56:40 GMT -5
Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 4:56:40 GMT -5
Oh my! this was a beauty of a Tear Drop! Wonderful imagery..my favorite line:
"Tears linger silently beneath My naked battle"
Really enjoyed this sweet piece....Musie
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