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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 30, 2008 19:08:46 GMT -5
I have been unjust, impatient Doubt descends on my mind Sorry begins Nights are for waterfalls Watermarked cheeks the outcome
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Post by tsu on Jul 31, 2008 13:19:01 GMT -5
oh..so sad and beautiful.. "nights are for waterfalls watermarked cheeks the outcome" lovley writing!
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Post by matw63 on Jul 31, 2008 14:28:51 GMT -5
so much said with so little words. unique and right up my street. kudos
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Post by bcoyotey on Aug 3, 2008 21:29:05 GMT -5
Jah-jah, These words cover the sad emotions so finely. You just keep getting better. Fantastic appeal. Lady B
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Post by solitude on Aug 6, 2008 9:40:11 GMT -5
Beautiful - wonderful emotion and such a nice piece to read. Loved it.
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Post by savageheart on Aug 7, 2008 3:53:23 GMT -5
simply beautiful
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 17, 2009 4:57:20 GMT -5
jah!
[such a bold title.. nice]
I have been unjust, impatient [very assertive] Doubt descends on my mind Sorry begins [love the wording] Nights are for waterfalls [love this metaphor] Watermarked cheeks the outcome [nice and tight and rich... great job!]
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