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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 8, 2008 0:43:26 GMT -5
How is it that tenderness wilts to vexation?
Highlights of exhilaration tossed down Autumn leaves falling Sunflower ambience twists to orange death
Lift me, Then hate me, Reduce me to A brown rainbow...
Fuzzy
Complex
Doomed
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Post by Created2Write on Oct 8, 2008 10:06:14 GMT -5
great job with this drop! I am just amazed at the many different ideas that are developed from those words given. Peace, C2W
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Post by tsu on Oct 8, 2008 10:18:37 GMT -5
what an stunning drop... "How is it that tenderness wilts to vexation?" what an amazing way to phrase that question... and i love these lines... "Lift me, Then hate me, Reduce me to A brown rainbow..." depicting the loss of the colour..the joy! c2w is so right..the ability and talent shown in these pieces is awesome..and this is one of the best!
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 8, 2008 21:39:06 GMT -5
Jah-Jah, I truly forgot I was reading a Drops piece. Marvelous impact with expertly placed words. You are wonderful, and so is your writing. *hug* Lady B
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