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Post by thehippyboy on Oct 24, 2008 18:57:43 GMT -5
surrounding my intestine we drive a snake
indefinitely nurtured she sweeps her premeditation modernizing rainbows.
nevertheless he streches his intestine noting death in burgandy; then her sweeping ax.
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Post by tsu on Oct 26, 2008 10:28:59 GMT -5
i love the central stanza..the singular description of "she sweeps" really captured my attention. great drop..hope to see you here again
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 30, 2008 18:57:22 GMT -5
Hi Hippie, Drops can be so hard to work with, but you have done a fine job. The imagery is amazingly strong. Kudos. Lady B
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Post by Created2Write on Oct 30, 2008 19:41:10 GMT -5
very unique drop, good write. C2W
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