icyminx
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Post by icyminx on Nov 17, 2008 20:32:27 GMT -5
This poem was made for fun with the help of 'drops of poetry', but even then the imperfection seriously reflects how I feel.
My thoughts on the World
Readied, relegated revelry; Untruthfully, such is, the inspiring burgundy Sun, fumigating the vestiges of melancholic annihilation.
Thence,
To have my mind sweep through the plains and sleep among the nymphs, and the blessed cranes,
will not save me from the bleeding star of Now.
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Post by sicksoul420 on Nov 17, 2008 23:43:51 GMT -5
You have some very interesting thoughts here, The drops of poetry can be quite a fun little thing to play with^^ Great work. I moved this back to the appropriate section for you, Welcome to TPS!
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Post by Created2Write on Nov 19, 2008 10:57:31 GMT -5
Well conveyed thoughts using drops. Good write. Peace, C2W
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 19, 2008 17:40:34 GMT -5
minx, This DROPS speaks volumes. Nice work, my dear.
will not save me from the bleeding star of Now.
Reminds me of the saying "Time Takes Time"
Welcome aboard! Lady B
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 17, 2009 5:03:11 GMT -5
icyminx,
My thoughts on the World [great bold beginning! bravo]
Readied, relegated revelry; [relegated revelry.. interesting oxymoron] Untruthfully, such is, the inspiring burgundy Sun, [like the color] fumigating the vestiges of melancholic annihilation.
Thence,
To have my mind sweep through the plains [very potent image.. excellent] and sleep among the nymphs, [interesting and positive] and the blessed cranes, [blessed gives us hope]
will not save me from the bleeding star of [oh dear... back to dangerous now... BRAVO!!!!!] Now. [so nice this has its own line]
best, molly
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Post by Sir Daniel on Feb 18, 2009 15:45:01 GMT -5
last week when I looked at this selection of drops words I said "heck no, there is no way I could ever make anything of value from them.." and here you did just what I couldn't.
Congrats on a wonderful drop poem, an achievement if I ever read one.
~ Daniel
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