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Post by matw63 on Jan 9, 2009 5:16:02 GMT -5
Drugs are a poison that will remain forever in his body
Lingering
Waiting to pounce at any sign of weakness
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Post by Created2Write on Jan 9, 2009 8:28:05 GMT -5
This was tight Mat. Very nice job. Peace, C2W
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Jan 9, 2009 15:19:57 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Jan 9, 2009 15:19:57 GMT -5
Very concise Matt, and oh so true. Great message. Wonderful writing. Lady B
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Jan 10, 2009 18:02:56 GMT -5
Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 10, 2009 18:02:56 GMT -5
Oh gosh....my exalt button is gone right now. This is truly an exaltable write to me. I really enjoyed this. Drugs are truly an addiction and even when you are recovering, the urge, the disease, the want is still there. A moster truly waiting to pounce. Nicely done. ***Applause***
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Jan 10, 2009 22:41:48 GMT -5
Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 10, 2009 22:41:48 GMT -5
Drugs are a poison that will remain forever in his body [very strongly stated ... good]
Lingering
Waiting to pounce [like the p again... from poison.. POUNCE.. powerful word] at any sign of weakness [good way to end... nice form]
also lingering is a nice midway word... good job m
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Jan 19, 2009 13:21:37 GMT -5
Post by Ben Johnson on Jan 19, 2009 13:21:37 GMT -5
Excellent one Mat
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Feb 14, 2009 18:59:35 GMT -5
Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 14, 2009 18:59:35 GMT -5
Strong and down to earth, Mat. excellent. molly
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Post by matw63 on Mar 1, 2009 9:21:51 GMT -5
Thank you for all the comments
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Mar 2, 2009 20:46:08 GMT -5
Post by clearbluespark on Mar 2, 2009 20:46:08 GMT -5
Nice piece Mat...and true indeed.
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Post by tsu on Mar 6, 2009 8:48:12 GMT -5
very pertinent and powerful write mat..concise and eloquent as ever with honesty and wisdom!!..i really admire the message and input of this piece hun exalt
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Mar 8, 2009 18:50:34 GMT -5
Post by ~ Arty k ~ on Mar 8, 2009 18:50:34 GMT -5
bravo well done my friend this has such a strong message
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