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Post by sunrise on Feb 2, 2009 15:52:56 GMT -5
The lunchtime wait develops when each client groans A hopeful representative advances around the smallest rolls Their manager supervised the faithful quest, offers lunch Were it an adequate chestnut to the taxpayer Then she is a fighter, upright public adviser Top successor, moderate philosopher, axes article
She endeavors to obscure an insect, it crawls underground Throughout the home it multiplies underneath the garage it expires Sore flesh it rots, the final opponent concluded She is playing sane, boiled insect ridden heaps Excess greed rages past the suspect The moderate writer gasps, laughs, dies
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 3, 2009 0:07:14 GMT -5
Wow, bravo....very exciting job, irisar. Takes my breath away how easily and realistically you narrate with the corral of vocab. molly
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 3, 2009 16:02:06 GMT -5
Applause! Great job on a Drops irisar. The flow is extremely well done! Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 5, 2009 12:13:26 GMT -5
I have to concur. The flow in this was incredible and the imagery was spot on. **Applause** Very nice job with the drops. Don't you just love this board? I know I do. When I seem to have writers block, I just come in here and try to get my creative juices flowing through the inspiration of the word list. Works every time...lol. I was a bit taken aback by the rotting flesh for a moment and thought I was never going to be able to eat lunch again, but that passed, lol. Very much enjoyed. Hugs~~~ Stacy
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