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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 3, 2009 0:22:21 GMT -5
Faithful wait hopeful -- propaganda spun -- played by low-crawl-greed-insects.
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 3, 2009 16:03:41 GMT -5
Miss Molly, I do believe you nailed it my dear. Concise and to the point. Much enjoyed this one. Lady B
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 3, 2009 19:51:29 GMT -5
Lady B, The colossal con of the sociopathic bottom feeders needs to be acknowledged ... we as society deserve and need catharsis. Narcissism is awesomely awful! Thanks for the validation. molly
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 5, 2009 12:16:26 GMT -5
Oh missmolly, I loved the opening line and how you changed it as if you weren't quite sure how to get your point across and faithful wasn't the right word of choice...lol. And the ending line that played off of line 2....well now, you hit the nail on the head with that one. I hate how people play off of the lifestyles of the people in the spotlight thanks to the dear old tabloid. I mean, they get up the same way, the eat the same way (although they may eat a little nicer than some do...lol), and they put their clothes on the same way. Bravo on this, and exalt, exalt, exalt!!! Hugs~~~ Stacy
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 5, 2009 12:17:38 GMT -5
Oh and I do hope you weren't thinking I was breaking your poem down too much. That wasn't my intentions at all...lol. I was just wanting to let you know what your poem evoked within me. Nicely done once again, mf. Stacy
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 5, 2009 14:29:38 GMT -5
stacy, what a treat! some positive karma my spirit sorely needs. it was a challenge to pack in so much frustration in only 17 syllables.... was willing to drop the -ing from crawl to enhance my contempt. thanks so much for appreciating! will be back soon. best, molly
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 5, 2009 14:32:56 GMT -5
Stacy,
Our posts crossed. Break down away on my stuff. i love to hear what my words evoke ... it is a gift that instructs and expands me. thanks. m
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