eboniwood
New Member
The greatest above all is "Love" and it is available for every person!
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Post by eboniwood on Feb 7, 2009 17:03:13 GMT -5
Faithful she wait, upright, hopeful
An opponent crawls undrneath flesh He groans when oppressed Gasp, rolls around, spins in quest
Outlined propaganda is past supervised underground representative is final, it dies
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 8, 2009 14:25:30 GMT -5
Hi eboni,Welcome to TPS and the Drops board. I am impressed with your first post here! Keep writing. (Please comment to 3 other poems for every 1 that you post) Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 9, 2009 17:01:33 GMT -5
I am equally impressed. I loved the ending two lines of this one. Nicely done.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 13, 2009 2:09:46 GMT -5
wow... such graphic action and intrigue ... and last two words, "it dies" ... you pack a lot in those lines for sure. well done! molly
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