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Post by macboogiewoogie on Apr 12, 2009 0:10:49 GMT -5
the top migrates in, spins, advances, crawls. its stunts die, its spin knocked around, until the smallest rolls remain.
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jabeau
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Post by jabeau on Apr 15, 2009 19:41:28 GMT -5
Very interesting. Often times I feel exaclty like that spinning top. We all just need a boost or a kind word sometimes.
Don't know if that's what you were going for, but I liked it a lot.
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nuqe
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Post by nuqe on Apr 16, 2009 12:04:50 GMT -5
It's not just a boost I need, I need a knock-out to get to the place I got to be.
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Apr 20, 2009 15:38:13 GMT -5
Very descriptive journey you have penned here of the top. Nicely done.
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Post by macboogiewoogie on Apr 20, 2009 18:10:27 GMT -5
Thank you all so much for your kind words! jabeau I really like your take on this, I must admit I wasn't thinking a lot when I wrote this but I like your interpretation.
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