katana
Wandering Muse
save me
Posts: 38
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slave
Apr 17, 2009 17:36:40 GMT -5
Post by katana on Apr 17, 2009 17:36:40 GMT -5
i kiss you tender,i hold you close i do all of this for you can't you see what do you want? for me to let go, well i can't I am addicted to you. I will do anything for love I will do anything for you. I am your slave do what you will.
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slave
Apr 20, 2009 15:39:20 GMT -5
Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Apr 20, 2009 15:39:20 GMT -5
This was my favorite:
This was so intense and passionate. Almost left the reader with a sense of desperateness. Very well done. Much enjoyed.
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slave
May 6, 2009 12:26:26 GMT -5
Post by strangefeeling on May 6, 2009 12:26:26 GMT -5
Very deep, drowning affair from a passionate heart! You have put some pure emotion within these great line!!! Nice~
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slave
May 6, 2009 12:33:38 GMT -5
Post by Mr J on May 6, 2009 12:33:38 GMT -5
Hi katana and welcome to TPS and the Drops of Poetry board! Passion and surrender captured in this short, bright piece! Nice use of the Drops!
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katana
Wandering Muse
save me
Posts: 38
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slave
May 13, 2009 11:18:23 GMT -5
Post by katana on May 13, 2009 11:18:23 GMT -5
Thank you all. i am new to this. i enjoyed reading your poems.
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slave
May 13, 2009 17:53:31 GMT -5
Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on May 13, 2009 17:53:31 GMT -5
however lest we forget she didn't use the interactive and selected words for this.. great poem sure but, not the right forum.. sorry..
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