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Post by manshapedvoid on Jun 11, 2009 7:07:26 GMT -5
Black physics, obscure opposite migrates the vulnerable
stretches focus compresses bubble explodes inertia
Black physics, obscure opposite concealed device
rots drive swamps outlook blackmails ideology
Black physics, obscure opposite promising heaven.
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Post by bcoyotey on Jun 17, 2009 14:57:46 GMT -5
Oh yea. Very nicely done manshapedvoid. Welcome to The Poet Sanctuary. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jun 20, 2009 14:54:39 GMT -5
Welcome aboard. The title was intense by itself, and when I got to reading, I was like "Wow!". I'm speechless. This is just such a thought provoking piece. Nicely done.
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Post by dustili on Jul 16, 2009 23:12:48 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS, this was very well written I liked the punch you put into this write Wow ! great....
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