phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
Posts: 230
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Post by phoenixalexis on Jun 23, 2009 10:18:03 GMT -5
Rock Musician, Another spiritual substitute, Indulges she in ideology, Blackmail beneath chords, Concealed stereo desire, He calls on vintage physics, with focused strategy, And her, vulnerable, sails with dread and regret, as he volunteers heroin, promising heaven.
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jun 23, 2009 12:25:04 GMT -5
This is so deep. This is a creative and brilliant drops. Nicely done.
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Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Jun 23, 2009 12:42:32 GMT -5
this is crazy.. get out of my head.. I did a drops piece a while back very similar.. without the musician parts.. it was about a heroin addict that was pretty much at the opposite end of "heaven" instead of being "promised it" very good drops poetry.. i am impressed due to the fact that I didn't even dabble in drops for a while after I joined and You just "jumped right in" kudos!!~NMI
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phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
Posts: 230
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Post by phoenixalexis on Jun 24, 2009 4:55:28 GMT -5
Do you know where the piece is Nevermore? I would really like to read it? I think drops is a really great idea. I have been trying for a while to shift away from rhyme and find it really hard to do, so the control of drops really helped.
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Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Jun 26, 2009 21:29:36 GMT -5
i agree... the piece is called opposite heaven right here!!
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chizl
Wandering Muse
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Post by chizl on Jul 3, 2009 18:44:21 GMT -5
I felt that...evokes alot of emotion...bravo
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