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Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Aug 3, 2009 11:47:21 GMT -5
I havent' done a drops piece in quite a while and I have done some great writes lately so let's try this fun thing yet again.. As ecology rots away to nothingness A heavenly regret plagues the earth The fakes bark at the physics of What humanity stretches just beyond Humanity's grasp for revival
Concealed is the device within deep Pockets of the spiritual world as The spiked bones are continuously Sticking me in my side, like a Thirsty mosquito hungering for blood
The black ideologies continue as Patience migrates south, of the dying Laying to waste in their beds in Coffin shaped boxes, just waiting For the time to rot away To nothingness and dust,
How dreaded is it?? that promises Of a cure go unheeded as the last Meal they will ever eat foams and Roils in the kettle at their feet Boiling away the last of hope from The bones that lack meat for a Starving soul..
I swear the method is amateur, just Tell them the truth, that they are Doomed to die alone in excruciating agony ~~And that it was YOUR fault~~
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phoenixalexis
Established Muse
I'd like to paint a moving image
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Post by phoenixalexis on Aug 4, 2009 3:31:31 GMT -5
Wow, this was really descriptive, I love the idea of 'pockets of the spiritual world' Beautiful Imagary! Exalt!x
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Post by bcoyotey on Aug 5, 2009 16:09:34 GMT -5
Joel, I have to use the same word; WOW! The descriptions are amazing. I felt this and now I want to create a Drops.
How dreaded is it?? that promises Of a cure go unheeded as the last Meal they will ever eat foams and Roils in the kettle at their feet Boiling away the last of hope from The bones that lack meat for a Starving soul..
*standing ovation* Exalt. Lady B
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Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Aug 5, 2009 16:20:44 GMT -5
wow!! used again.. I never expect a response like this.. it is amazing ever since I have dropped my rhyme scheme I have written so many great writes.. (that even I like) and that is such a rare thing for me.. to really "feel" good about what I am writing.. thanks you guys.. so very much.
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mslani
Wandering Muse
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Post by mslani on Aug 11, 2009 6:52:13 GMT -5
Wow! all that from drops! thanks for inspiring me
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