mslani
Wandering Muse
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Kettle
Aug 11, 2009 6:50:51 GMT -5
Post by mslani on Aug 11, 2009 6:50:51 GMT -5
sing kettle sing bubble, boil, compress explode, declare, discuss you swear you sing of heaven so why does your foaming ideology rot?
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Kettle
Aug 11, 2009 12:14:10 GMT -5
Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Aug 11, 2009 12:14:10 GMT -5
Very interesting approach to the drops, my dear. Who would have thought that a kettle had so much life? Loved it. Look forward to reading more from you. Welcome to TPS. If you ever need anything, I'm just a pm away.
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Kettle
Aug 13, 2009 17:44:07 GMT -5
Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Aug 13, 2009 17:44:07 GMT -5
ohhh holy cow.... why does your foaming ideology rot??!!!! freakin brilliant I say.. unbelievable.. if the poem wasn't good enough (which it was better than that).. the last line alone would be enough to make me freak out.. such statements are so rare.. but, welcome to my thirsty ears.. well done!! exalt (sadly pending) for such exquisite drops poetry.. amazing..
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Kettle
Aug 23, 2009 18:32:41 GMT -5
Post by Lady Whight - member of STUPID on Aug 23, 2009 18:32:41 GMT -5
Not what I expected from reading the title.. You expand the metaphor wonderfully and the last line is such a great anticlimax, questioning all the violent actions described before. Superb!
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Kettle
Aug 29, 2009 9:06:11 GMT -5
Post by astroannie on Aug 29, 2009 9:06:11 GMT -5
I didn't "get" the ending but I love the expressiveness of the rest of it.
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