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Post by smokinjoe72 on Sept 4, 2009 2:27:47 GMT -5
The dreaded dispute; Vulnerable heroin. Patience he desires.
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 7, 2009 12:46:31 GMT -5
Hi Joe, This is a multi-layered Drops piece. I like the way the meaning is condensed into just a few word. Drops can be so challenging but you made it look easy. Wonderful! Lady B
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Post by needleme on Oct 1, 2009 11:36:33 GMT -5
In haiku format, this poem had more deep meaning than the length could hint to. Very well done!
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:41:12 GMT -5
I think patience is something that each of us desires from time to time. I know I found myself relating to that line, especially now, today. But that's another story, lol. I thought the poem was very cleverly fitted to the title. I enjoyed this very much.
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