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Post by iidhaegn on Sept 7, 2009 13:49:23 GMT -5
Obscure physics Concealed vulnerable desire. Swears he she can't focus.
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chizl
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Post by chizl on Sept 8, 2009 0:03:33 GMT -5
interesting....do we make of it what we will? "Swears he she can't focus".......identity crisis?
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:36:58 GMT -5
I loved the line..... Nicely done. Very creative drops. This is what drops poetry is all about. Simplicity in the length, but so detailed in the message through your talented poetic pen. ***Applause***
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Post by knpoet on Dec 15, 2009 13:52:43 GMT -5
This is interesting, sounds more like a he/she relationship crisis - "obscure physics" indeed! Nice!
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Post by ~ Arty k ~ on Jan 3, 2010 9:49:00 GMT -5
short but sweet well done
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Jan 3, 2010 22:59:04 GMT -5
I too thought of a relationship here. This is a well worded poem. Splendid.
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