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Post by smokinjoe72 on Oct 2, 2009 3:58:07 GMT -5
Black; approaching dawn. Heaven sings opposite chord; The After declared.
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Post by needleme on Oct 2, 2009 7:28:37 GMT -5
Nice, sounds like fall out from a nuclear bomb? Love the haiku approach and the whole Drops of Poetry challenge. It is fun, isn't it? Very good piece, this one, joe.
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:42:10 GMT -5
Oohh the ending line was so powerful to me, and I loved how you gave emphasis to the bold word in it. Nicely done. Exalt! Very cleverly crafted and most passionate drops poem. I look forward to reading more. Don't ya just love the drops?
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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on Nov 6, 2009 21:08:32 GMT -5
short but very lengthy in depth very good way to arrange the words
I enjoyed it very much
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