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Post by metalsoft on Oct 5, 2009 21:47:17 GMT -5
Mark me-he discusses ideology She declared-my patience is split Promising dispute explodes Discourages teacher
Drive dodges inertia College rots edge Tangent skips method Can't we chat? Cite the logical black whole
A regret mechanic indulges in vintage obscure outlook.
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 14, 2009 21:33:25 GMT -5
*claps* Splendid drops metalsoft. Very impressive use of the words. Love the tude in the first stanza. Lady B
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Post by metalsoft on Oct 14, 2009 22:50:34 GMT -5
*bows* why thank you, Lady B! Your kind words are inspiring. Gee...my Mom always told me to not cop a 'tude <grins>
metalsoft
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:58:11 GMT -5
For some reason, this reminded me of philosophy class, lol. I loved it!!! Can't wait to read more from you. This is a wonderfully crafted gem.
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Post by metalsoft on Oct 19, 2009 20:47:46 GMT -5
Many thanks, bobswife. Sociology class lent me this one, believe it or not...lol. I appreciate your very kind words! metalsoft
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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on Nov 18, 2009 13:46:31 GMT -5
the personification is very much on point in this drop of poetry
i enjoyed reading all the words you hand picked, and situated accordingly
well done
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Post by unsinkmolly on Mar 6, 2010 23:47:06 GMT -5
metal, love in particular the payoff phrase, black whole. Excellent! molly
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