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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 13, 2010 21:22:30 GMT -5
Closet comic offends...
Throughout a dark void she dresses precious hopes:
Flakes, diamonds, ice...
My snow fall powered supernatural rants.
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 16, 2010 21:45:38 GMT -5
This is gorgeous blue. I love the easy feeling of multi-layered depth. Lady B
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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 17, 2010 21:59:52 GMT -5
Thanks Lady B, I'm glad you like it!
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Post by tonaleclipse on Jan 18, 2010 8:13:50 GMT -5
The second and third line are so beautiful. The poem flows quite nicely
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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 19, 2010 12:39:23 GMT -5
Thanks tonaleclipse, for reading this piece and commenting. I am glad you liked it.
Cheers,
G.
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