grendelone
Established Muse
Someone will have to accept and deal with who we are sometime!
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Post by grendelone on Mar 4, 2010 1:05:43 GMT -5
She bolts around lonely hate, a paperback perfect struggle.
How tough he is without fears, hopes only calm surplus rants.
Past insensitive combats sleep, enlighten to supernatural feast.
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 8, 2010 23:05:07 GMT -5
grendelone, the series of couplets makes an excellent impression for a Drops piece. Very interesting and original. Lady
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Post by oursummertrees. on Mar 16, 2010 13:40:43 GMT -5
this is really good - like Lady said, the couplets are great. i especially like the first set!
-Trees
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Post by ContagiousNonsense on Mar 28, 2010 20:28:06 GMT -5
haha! I love it. My favorite parts lines: a paperback perfect struggle and enlighten to supernatural feast. Nicely done.
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Post by Ne Vile Velis on Apr 1, 2010 10:38:57 GMT -5
great representation of the situation! I loved it
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