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Post by oursummertrees. on Mar 16, 2010 2:43:20 GMT -5
she is a wretched struggle he fears
examining below paperback dresses backbone - lonely snow fall below opposite coasts overlooking the void
after perfect union he travels
without hope.
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 16, 2010 15:41:45 GMT -5
Wow. Miss trees. This is popping with emotion and Umph. It is unbelievable to me that this came from Drops. You are amazing my dear. The opening line is a powerful draw
she is a wretched struggle
then the two worder seals the intent and emotion.
he fears
And the perfect closer
after perfect union he travels
without hope.
Incredible. Just incredible. Exalt. (hugs) Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 17, 2010 22:19:55 GMT -5
I agree, this didn't feel like a drops at all, it was excellent and the ending took my breath away. Beautiful work Trees.
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Post by oursummertrees. on Mar 18, 2010 0:20:55 GMT -5
Lady, Jah - thanks for reading my first Drops attempt! And for the exalt, Lady... it was fun!
-Trees
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Post by cjr1217 on Jun 1, 2010 18:41:36 GMT -5
Wow, i really liked this. I'm new and have to admit i don't get alot of these but i got this and i liked it.
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Post by oursummertrees. on Jun 1, 2010 23:11:44 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS cjr - and I'm glad you got this! It was a bit abstract for me, but I like it this piece a lot. Thanks for finding it!
-Trees
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