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Post by unsinkmolly on Apr 3, 2010 17:50:47 GMT -5
Pocket memories pump art. Darling Hope emerges. My void is playground.
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Post by thememoryflowered on Apr 12, 2010 14:35:13 GMT -5
I like the term "pocket memories"
Great use of the word "pump" and an overall thought provoking thought. Well done.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Apr 12, 2010 23:36:02 GMT -5
thanks, thememory ... appreciate! nice cohen quote. welcome to PS!!! see ya on campus. i hang out at haiku thread a lot and here. molly
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Post by marise on Apr 19, 2010 23:31:19 GMT -5
"My void is playground. " How incredibly powerful. The Idea that your emptiness, your lacking and your hollowness - is the joy of someone else. What a powerful picture - awesome write.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Apr 21, 2010 12:56:52 GMT -5
interesting take on this one, marise. thanks! molly
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