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Post by cjr1217 on May 25, 2010 18:21:53 GMT -5
transformation
she listens to the constant rain it rolls down the air wandering doubt speaks the memories rage the rubbish flies transforming me in it emerges renewed hope
my first try! is it to short?
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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on May 31, 2010 12:51:20 GMT -5
Wonderful and welcome to TPS
as your first try at this, you did very well I enjoy short, but impactive pieces such as this
great job, looking forward to more of your work
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Dilasha
Wandering Muse
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Post by Dilasha on Jun 19, 2010 18:11:07 GMT -5
hey its really nice! n as i love rain , a symbol of hope for me, i loved ur beautiful piece of art !!!
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jun 26, 2010 12:53:11 GMT -5
there's a real push pull of connotations to this. good job! m
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